Rupert Wanted Surrender

        Rupert Wanted Surrender

 “Love is a breach in the walls, a broken gate.

   Love sells the proud heart’s citadel to fate.”~ Rupert Brooke

Would women be as likely as a man

To write such sentiments, to think of love

As breaching walled in strength, as Æthelstan

Attacking York?  Would Ecgwynn think that shove

And cracks were what a woman’s love should be

About, or would she judge that love is more

A matter of a mother’s chestnut tree

That brings forth candles and its nuts galore

In season?  Would a woman think a gate

Should be a battered door in love’s attack?

Indeed, would women feel that love is fate

Like battering rams deployed by maniac

Testosterone?  The fortress men protect

Is pride.  That swell is what must not be wrecked.

Phillip Whidden