Reeking Champ; and, Raving for the Ravers—Paired Sonnets

         Reeking Champ

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“Achilles exists only through Homer.” ~ François-René de Chateaubriand in his preface to Les Natchez, 1826

“Achilles was a heel.”  ~ Lapel badge from the mid-twentieth century

Achilles fills mythologies of Greece

Like body odor.  He is like the hair

In underarms.  His presence is obese

Because the smell of him is everywhere.

Perhaps this meant a lot to someone blind.

His whole society ignored the smell,

Though.  He is like a rotting bacon rind

But men ignore this.  Nothing can dispel

This brute, because of poetry.  His ire

Ignored, his heroism held up for

Male worship,  he refuses to expire,

Still stinking as he does for loving war.

..If Homer had not sung about this man,

….He might have petered out with his crude clan.

 

       Raving for the Ravers

“Achilles exists only through Homer” ~ François-René de Chateaubriand in his preface to Les Natchez, 1826

Today the poets are the least of all,

Except for crude ones.  If they curse and swear

With dirty words and if their lines appall

The decent, if mouths spew out grossness, blare

Out hatred and contempt for women, bitch

And ho, and so on, then their rapping sells.

They get recorded and they end up rich.

They cannot cast the noble, wondrous spells

That fashion heroes for the eons.  Rhymes

And flailing rhythms are created to

Sell filth online.  Let’s glorify vile crimes

Like rape, they chant.  Ignore what’s great and true

And never speak of honor or a brave

Man.  Spew out slime in one long ranting rave.