Free Verse as Nightmare Surrealism

   Free Verse as Nightmare Surrealism

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“I thirst for new songs

without moons or irises,

and without loves that have died.”  ~ Lorca, New Songs (Cantos Nuevos)

Who doesn’t?  But the problem is the songs

Aren’t songs.  Once irises and moons are gone,

We  suffer dreck.  Where poetry belongs,

We get instead a trashcan rattling dawn,

Some words slapped down in little almost lines.

The imagery is random like some dumped

Word puzzle by the road, or like landmines

Defused, or like a druggie sprawling slumped

In rags alone for smoking frozen spice.

When unrequited love is ditched for lust,

Some stanzas (?) made of awkward words like lice

Suck Sappho’s head and cause a shattered bust.

  Let’s turn from moons and fragrances in verse

    That make a fool of poems.  Call the hearse.

Phillip Whidden